Wednesday, 27 November 2019

Heather the weather girl

Kia Ora!
Today's post is about a weather girl.
This week we read a new article. This story was about a girl loving the weather and can tell the weather without the weatherman telling her.
Heather was out in the rain but then a lightning stuck her. So she was sent to the hospital. After she got sent to the hospital she went home and her parents watched the news. The weatherman got up and told them the weather until heather said the same as heather.

So this post is about a helmet protect when your out of the rain. Most of you know this isn't a thing. But this is my synthesis work from my reading activities. This is what I made. Information will be told in the post.

Hope you like it!
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 November 2019 at 10:57

    HI Zipporah,
    I love this blog post, I like how you added information so people can understand, when you were explaining you talked about how she went to the hospital so you reminded me, maybe next time you could explain the task more.
    but you did and good job
    Ella 😀

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    1. Anonymous28 November 2019 at 10:16

      Hi ELLA!
      Thank you so much for commenting. Love the way you told me what you loved and what reminded you!

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  2. Anonymous28 November 2019 at 10:28

    Hey Zippy! I really like how you added labels to show how your device works, I also really like how Heather got struck by lightening and why she needs this device. This reminded me of how it would look like if everyone would be wearing this and how your idea would change the world to be a better place. Maybe next time you could add like some body protection.

    Good job on everything else though!

    - Kylie

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  3. Anonymous28 November 2019 at 10:37

    Hey Zipporah,

    I like how you used a lot of detail and information.

    I did something different from this. I added modifications to a bike helmet.

    Next time could you add more information.

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    1. Anonymous29 November 2019 at 09:15

      Hi Tyler,
      Thank you for commenting. I will check yours and comment. The reason why I didn't add to much information is because I don't want everyone to keep reading and sometimes I can add to much. Also What do I need to add in more information. I will change it soon! Thanks for telling me Tyler

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  4. Anonymous29 November 2019 at 09:37

    Hey Zippy! I like how you did labels, because others didn't really. I also like how you added a big description! Your description reminded me of when I had to go to the hospital. I think maybe next time, you could add a person to make the armour look more clear.

    Overall, you did GREAT!

    cyaaa,

    -Mya

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