Kia Ora!
Today's blog is an explanation of how beans are picked and then how its crushed.
I don't think this was hard because I just had to tell you how it picked and then crushed.
Also this weeks reading story is a Non Fiction and its named Vanilla Ice Cream, Please. It is a girl from Tonga that picks vanilla beans to giveaway.
I had to make a type of information web. This is my google drawing of how its picked and crushed.
Hope you all like it :) <3
Please comment if anything is wrong or I need to do something to make it more interesting!
Hey Zipporah,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have all the information and how you have detail.
When I did my one I also had a lot of information.
Next time can you make the writing bigger.
Hey Tyler,
Deletethank you for commenting! I did change it a bit if I do it to big it'll go over the page. But thank you for commenting
Hi Zippy :)
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, I really like your information web.
Something I like is that you added some colour and alot of information for us to understand.
I think you could make sure you can see the title properly so it's not blending in too much, but overall you did a good job!
- Mya :)
Hey hey Mya!
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog post. I have changed the color to black I did notice it was blending in with the yellow but I did sorta see it still but I did change it to black just to make it clear for those who can't really see since it is light!
Thank you Mya!