So basically I have a new reading story and its fiction! Which is totally my favorite because it is much easier than non fiction! This story is named Dirty Dishes and it's about a boy who is terrified of the dish washer because it been acting weird!
So I have different stages on this because it's a course. These are the things I have added!
Voice check, Shield, Getting ready which means to practice and attack!
Voice check is to yell and not be nasty, shield just incase if they hit and try to attack you, get ready for the mean attack and attack for you to keep safe. This is not dangerous because it is not kids obviously no attacking kids just yelling. So this it!
This part of the activity is the Synthesis and I chose the first one which is the course and Peter wants to help the ones who are going through this their selves so he thought to help out. So far he has been going through this dishwasher problem himself and thinks its not fair because it never happens to his mum and dad.
I hope you like it! :)
Hey Zippy! I really liked how you showed the steps on what peter was going through and like his voice check and his shield that can like protect him. Next time I think you could add some more detail into the dishwasher because I didn't really get why it didn't have any effects on it like bubbles storming out or like something like that! But overall good job!
ReplyDelete- Kylie.