Kia Ora!
In my reading activities I made a story web.
I did not find this hard it was medium easy.
Elephant Whisperer:
This story was about a girl and an elephant.
Her name was Charlotte and she loves Elephant. One day she went to the zoo and went to look at the elephants. But on that day there was an elephant emergency. Samba one of the elephants, went crazy because of a mouse. Samba went all over the zoo until Charlotte came and hushed the elephant.
She went to Samba to calm down and so she did. Samba carried her to onto his back and went back to the cage.
Elephant Whisperer:
This story was about a girl and an elephant.
Her name was Charlotte and she loves Elephant. One day she went to the zoo and went to look at the elephants. But on that day there was an elephant emergency. Samba one of the elephants, went crazy because of a mouse. Samba went all over the zoo until Charlotte came and hushed the elephant.
She went to Samba to calm down and so she did. Samba carried her to onto his back and went back to the cage.
What do you like about?!
Hello Zipporah, I like how you put a lot of details in the example part and that you put a nice description on your blog post. Maybe next time put a bit more about why or how you did it.But overall you did great.
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