5 sense writing

Kia Ora, In our class Room 5 wrote a 5 sense story describing a picture. We were told that we were already there.

Our Teacher put up a photo of a view with people in it. So we wrote a writing about the photo. The photo was 2 people on stone 1 with arms and one sitting down. It looked like a forest and a sea by the forest with some buliding. 5 sense: Write a story telling us Where, Smell, See, Feel and sound.

I hope you like it

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Walking around and just found a spot. Where you see a beautiful view. The look of the sea, The buildings we build, The water we drink. By just one cliff, you see an amazing view. All you can see is a beautiful nature land.

 Mmm the fresh smell. Like a land full of mint leaves. Air moving towards my side with my little sniff. AIAIA the smell gives me goosebumps. Looking around I see the sea with a little land. With a little pat, I smell the leaves. Sometimes the leaves fall but gains up their strength.

 I opened my mouth and a breeze of the wind lands on my tongue. Tastes like fresh food. The breeze has the taste of the leaves. Fresh leaves. Like donuts in the air, with sugar on top. Oh how wonderful. 

As I put arm up the wind gushes between my arms. Pushes with all its strength. The touch of the leaf, thin, shiny and at the bottom it has a little stick. The rocks I sat on, spiky and pointy. Some flat and some broke. The grass, very thin and with a little tip. The wind blowing into my ear. Oh just like I am at the beach.

The leaves crashes into each other, the rocks falling down. The amazing sounds it made. How the leaves were being stepped on. Sounded like a bone cracking.

 Would you just like to see the world around us and see how beautiful it is? Would just see the plants growing for us to make the world even beautiful?