Thursday, 8 November 2018

Woodends Camp 2018


                  Woodends Camp 2018


On November 5 2018, St Bernadettes went to camp!
The whole  Senior classes went on the 2 night and 3 day camp at Woodend Christian Camp. We went on a bus and drove to Woodend.

As we went, the teachers told us what cabin room we are in. In my cabin, the people who were in were Tali, Fria, Faith, Kylie, Antonette, Nika and Jaime. We got our stuff in the cabin and went out to go to the activities we were doing.

On the Second day of camp, the struggle I had was wall climbing. We walked down to the wall climbing with our leader and sat down to listen to the instructions. Our main host Cody told us about the anchor and the bilayers. First we put on a harness to get us up and down then a helmet just incase for any brain damages or any injuries. We started off with the one we could do then started onto the harder ones. When it was my turn, I started off with number two to see if I could make it. As I went, the struggle came. I stopped half way because I lost my grippings and it was quite hard to climb. Instead of climbing, I helped out and sat awhile. On my second go, I went on number one and climbed to try pass. When I was climbing I gave up and tried to get down but I changed my mind and kept going. When I touched the bar, I looked down with a scared face and asked if my teammates are ready. I went down and took the harness off.

I'm definitely looking forward to go back ( Maybe?) and make new friends and start over and do the activities again!


WALT: To write about the struggles we had at camp

2 comments:

  1. Hi Zipporah it's Antonette from St.Bernadette's School,

    The part I liked about your writing was the "(Maybe?)" at your last sentence it added some humour in your writing. Your writing made me think about the time my group was on the climbing wall and the slight struggles we had. Maybe next time you could put in your writing the W.A.L.T and what you had to do so that it would be easier for your readers to know what you're learning about and give you feedback. Overall your writing was great and it showed that you gave a 100% in to it!

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    1. Kia Ora Antonette,

      Thank you for commenting on my blog post! I have changed my writing and added my WALT!

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