Kia ora!
This we read another article named the big jump.
It is really nice to read even though it is pretty long :/
The story is about a guy scared of going on a zipline.
Phobias :D
I am scared of heights and only been on a zipline for 3 times so I'm never really use to it.
What I designed is a zipline. It's going across the road to my friend house, Talia. Since her house is just across the road that is where she is gonna get home.
Hope you like it.
Are you scared of heights?
HI ZIPPY! Nice blog post. I like how you made the drawing clear, and not too crowded. I also like how you were creative and added a Nome. There's a few things I think you could work on, But some of them are is to make the writing a lot bigger, I can't really see it clearly. Also to add more writing and labels!!
ReplyDeleteOverall, good job :)
- My