In Room 5, We are learning to write a descriptive writing.
We were all given an instruction to make a writing, telling people our favorite season.
We had to choose, Summer, Autumn, Winter and spring.
So I chose summer!!
We were also expected to include paragraphs because some of us in room 5 don't know how to make a paragraph or how we start it.
I am not naming or being rude this is what we were struggling with :)
Please r+c (read and comment) on my work on what I should work on next time!
Questions:
What is your favorite season?
Why is it your favorite?
Do you like all of them?
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Seasons happens every year. Summer, Autumn, winter and spring. My favorite is summer. Now you know mine, what is your favorite?
Summer is amazing. It is my favorite season out of the 4! Summer makes you want to eat so much Ice cream and lots of cooling food. It keeps me chill and always makes me want to sleep. More sleep, More growth.
Summer is a great time to have fun times with your family. It is also a great time to hangout with friends.. And Ice cream. When it’s hot it makes feel cold so I cuddle myself up.
It is a great time to hangout with friends and family! When you get bored we can always hang out with friends. Like going swimming, shopping, going to the movies and more. It also gives us more time with family like going on a holiday somewhere far. Hanging out with friends and families brings us happiness, joy and love!
Summer will bring up all your feelings and turn it into joy!
Swimming is great during summer. It helps work on our skills even though we may not be able to do it. You can also get tanned which means, darker skin and be able to have our time to look precious.
Also it can make our swimming better if we ever had surf boards.
Summer can be a hard job by working during a hot time but it gives us more time to work than just working on our phones or any devices that keep us attracted to.
It also helps us to forget and remember that our family is still out there not just here to wait for you to notice them. Always remember that family is always there.
Summer is a great time to think about the fun times and hangout.
Also if you don’t like summer I think you should because it is a great time for friends and holidays and CHRISTMAS!
Now that you know why I love summer and enjoy summer! It is now time to me why you love your favourite season!
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