Friday, 5 July 2019

Llama Writing

What I found hard: To make the story.
What I enjoyed doing the most: Making it up to 1000 words.
What I can work on: Checking spelling.

Our Class Room 5 had to work on writing a story. Since we did art and made llamas we had to write about the Llama. So we did. For 2 days we had our stories checked to be re crafted.
Please check if there is any mistakes! I cannot be bothered reading it :)
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Waking up with my mouth made. How can I talk?! Then was made eyes. What is going on here? I suddenly found out- I was being made. Made by who? How? What? I was confused. Then more Llama’s came.

 How is Llama’s made? I was becoming lame with all the questions. I am suppose to be a precious Princess not a dumb bum. I mean who is making me? I ran to the other Llama asking, “What is happening?” He didn’t answer. Then I ran to another Llama asking, “Why are you wearing a crown!? I’m the Princess here.” “Ahem, Flower Princess not a Royal Princess,” said Llama 2.

 I was bummed. Mad. Sad. Dumb. But made an idea! I thought of making a camera. A camera that’s spies on people. Mmm for a good reason. To stop making Llama’s like me. I didn’t like Llama’s looking like me. With a crown, big eyes, same color fluff, big nose and mouth!

I couldn’t imagine more Llama’s looking like me. I thought of having plastic surgery but I know that they will make me uglier and more thin. I didn’t wanna be thin like my baby sister I wanted to be thick! Nothing but thick. Thickness makes me beautiful and fat. I like being fat. Anyways, I need help. Help with making a camera. All I need is eyeballs and plastic. I got some friends to help me make the spy cameras. While making it, they put on music and I fell in love with a song named I like me better. The humming the beat just made me fall in love with that song. My next best friend song. Again, We kept working and finally did it! *Angels starts singing opera-ish* New shining shimmering Llama spy camera. I was so happy I jumped up and down, but all I need to do is to set it up. Me and my squad went and set up the cameras. I got my computer and let it connect. Beep. It’s on! I jumped up and down cause duh I was excited.

 The next morning.

I woke up again. Yay I guess. I got ready for a hangout- Oh no!! I need to look on my device and see that creator. I quickly opened my computer and look on the spy cameras. And yes! Caught. It was a girl named Zipporah. Zippy. Argh! But I’m happy she made me chunky like a little baby. I was pretty upset because I wish that I was the only one made. I was heartbroken, down, heavy hearted and sick. But I do have friends that make me feel proud and happy. Anyways, I’m great! Fantastico. I look on my computer trying to copy her face because it’s gorgeous like me. But I think that I should quit. I can never do that, I might go to jail for stalking the creator. I never wanted to end up being like Jorja Moulin, She is the one I see everytime with Zipporah. And Ouhh Here’s how I think about her: Cute, Bossy, Scary, can be mean, beautiful and cute eyebrows. I mean I like it when she plucks her eyebrows and makes me laugh! But ahh I feel free. I kind of want to go on a mission like obviously why not. So I may think of keeping on going. I am quite bored too so yes! I quickly put up the camera and recorded. Once I recorded it, I saved it. As soon as I saved it, I ran to the court. “I am reporting a crime!” I said “Uh what for?” said the Llama Judge. “For this woman making to much llama” I said annoyedly. I wasn’t happy until the Judge said, “Llama’s are born by getting drawn. What is up with you? Do you know this is a crime for you stalking!?” The Judge yelled. I was so upset and invisible. The judge hates me now. I never knew. Maybe because I am this dumb. I fainted.

 The next day,

 Oh my goodness. What happened?! What? How? When? “Calm down Flower! You’re home because you fainted. Yes! I had to carry your fat bum to your own house!” said Angel. “Oh my goodness, you remind me of pinkie pie from my little pony. “Anyways, We are invited to somewhere so let’s go!” yelled Angel. “Where? At Lara Jeans and Peters party” I asked. “No, stop dreaming! You’re a Llama. We’re going to a party” I was excited. I always felt invisible but I didn’t mind. “Show me the invitation” I said. Angel gave me the invitation.

 Angel and Flower, You are invited to a Pajama Party. It is finally the time to have a party! Please come at my house Thuesday to Fuesday.


 What is Thuesday and Fuesday? I thought- Oh never mind Llama language here. But I was kind of in a rush so I went and got changed. I wasn’t feeling well still but I had medicine.

 Angel and I were walking to Sister James house for the Pajama party. It was also a sleepover. I was super excited having to have a sleepover party. Yes I kept jumping but I wasn’t the only one jumping. It was ANGEL too! So we stopped because we were planning as well and got quite annoying. Then Angel stopped and turned right.

 We’re here! We’re finally here. Ok! “Tapioca girl calm down it's not the first time you have had a sleep” Angel said. We went inside and saw the big mansion. “Do you think Sister James actually bought this?” asked Angel. “Yes, He’s rich and obviously we know he had this fight with Tati. But the funny thing is that he lost lots of Subs!” I said “Not that funny but hahah yes I know” Angel said Surprisingly. “Mmm yes, I’m feeling quite dizzy right now.” I said mumbling. I knew that this would come. I wasn’t ready. I want to have this. *Ploop* The end.


2 comments:

  1. Hello my name is Ashlee and I am a year six at Yaldhurst Model school wow such a cute lama good work maybe next time you van work on not putting too much writing.

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    1. Hello Ashlee,
      Yip! Thank you for saying my llama is cute!! It was pretty hard to do but I did put my hardest in it!
      Sorry! I added to much of writing!

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