Aloha Zipporah, I love your post about Anzac day and how you added questions in with your post. My grandad didn't fight in the war but he did try to get in. One thing you could work on is checking to see if your sentences make sense, can't wait to see your next post. yours sincerely, Greer
Kia ora Greer, Thank you so so much for replying I have also checked if my sentences made sense. I was very confused on what I was supposed to change anyways Thank you. 😁❤
Kia ora Zipporah, I love your post about Anzac day. I really liked how you made it detailed and I also like how you put some questions in. I do not know if my grandad fought in the war, but my dad did but it was in a different country.
Maybe next time you could answer your questions underneath it. Did your grandad fight in the war?
Kia Ora Talia! Thank you for commenting! It is okay that you don't know that your grandad went into war but I'm sure my Grandad didnt go! Thank you again for commenting.
Kia ora Zipporah! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School.
Wow! What a high quality blog post! I'm surprised! I love all the information about Anzac day! I actually learnt a couple things while reading this!
I'm not sure my great grandad fought in the war, but I heard a story that there was this man that fought in the war, but he was shot right in the chest. He thought he was going to die, but luckily, the bullet was fired directly into his pocket. And in that pocket, were coins, arranged perfectly so the bullet was stopped by the coins!
Next time, maybe you could check your full stops, capital letters, and spelling!
Aloha Zipporah, I love your post about Anzac day and how you added questions in with your post. My grandad didn't fight in the war but he did try to get in. One thing you could work on is checking to see if your sentences make sense, can't wait to see your next post.
ReplyDeleteyours sincerely, Greer
Kia ora Greer,
DeleteThank you so so much for replying I have also checked if my sentences made sense. I was very confused on what I was supposed to change anyways Thank you.
😁❤
Kia ora Zipporah, I love your post about Anzac day. I really liked how you made it detailed and I also like how you put some questions in. I do not know if my grandad fought in the war, but my dad did but it was in a different country.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could answer your questions underneath it.
Did your grandad fight in the war?
Kia Ora Talia!
DeleteThank you for commenting! It is okay that you don't know that your grandad went into war but I'm sure my Grandad didnt go!
Thank you again for commenting.
Kia ora Zipporah! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteWow! What a high quality blog post! I'm surprised! I love all the information about Anzac day! I actually learnt a couple things while reading this!
I'm not sure my great grandad fought in the war, but I heard a story that there was this man that fought in the war, but he was shot right in the chest. He thought he was going to die, but luckily, the bullet was fired directly into his pocket. And in that pocket, were coins, arranged perfectly so the bullet was stopped by the coins!
Next time, maybe you could check your full stops, capital letters, and spelling!
Also, what does lest we forget mean?
From Hana